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Ava Flores
• Saturday, 26 December, 2020
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I’ve shared the reasons why before, but as a recap: it’s taught me more about life than any other book, it’s beautifully written, and has helped me through anxiety and trauma. The short answer: It depends on whether you want a War and Peace that’s easier to read or a translation that’s more faithful to the original.

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Isaac Babel Garrett’s translation of War and Peace is in the public domain, so it’s the version you’ll probably get if you download a free copy. She hired a secretary who would read the Russian text to her aloud, and she would dictate back the English translation.

The Severe and Volokhonsky translation is a common choice to pick up in bookshops, and it is serviceable. But I struggle to read it, and I feel it loses the magic of other translations, like Anthony Briggs’s.

The Maude's knew Tolstoy well, spent a long time living in Moscow, and spoke impeccable Russian. The Maude translation used to be more clunky, and it was criticized for including anglicized character names.

My older and battered edition of War and Peace is Penguin’s earlier paperback, with a portrait of a Russian princess on the front cover. “The picture of everything that people consider to be their happiness and greatness, their sorrow and their humiliation, is complete.

From IN Strabo’s review of War and Peace, Zara, January 1870. I started Tolstoy Therapy back in 2012 to share my healing journey through anxiety and PTSD with books.

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The team of Richard Severe and Larissa Volokhonsky became famous because of the Oprah's Book Club selection of their Anna Karenina in 2004, while earning snipes from academics for the stiff literalness of their many Russian translations. All translators agree that Tolstoy writes his own special Russian, bold and clear, yet full of deliberate repetitions of particular words and phrases.

For instance, instead of trimming and polishing his sentences into artistic units, he left them plain and lively; if they looked too slick, he kinked and roughed them up. Severe and Volokhonsky are certainly good and careful; they also offer useful notes, chapter summaries and biographical entries on the featured nonfictional Russian and French military leaders of 1805-1812.

He didn't fuss about proofreading it or compiling definitive editions; he let his friends, editors and wife make executive decisions about cuts and, for instance, the free use of French in dialogue. Neither the popular Russian edition nor Broomfield provides notes about how and when the manuscripts are being soldered together, and there are at least two jarring instances where the draft seems out of order (see, for example, Part VI, Chapters 1-2).

Everyone will find something disconcerting in the rough draft and also perhaps something strangely pleasing about seeing famous characters in deleted scenes or acting unlike themselves. For instance, Tolstoy develops substantial backstory and scenes for the rogue Molotov and allows us to accompany Nikolai Rostov as he loses his virginity in a wartime brothel.

(Compare this delightful scene to Tolstoy's later teeny tweaking of it, in Severe and Volokhonsky's translation : “Natasha jumped up barefoot and, snatching her slippers, ran to her room. The draft is, not surprisingly, sketchy in parts, and we see Tolstoy rushing through sections that he would later develop into memorable and long scenes.

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His famous arguments about war and history in the rough draft are much more personal and modest (and, to my taste, more engaging). One of the best commentators on this novel, Gary Saul Mormon (in “Hidden in Plain View” (Stanford University Press, 1987)), is so appreciative of the linguistic dances by the bilingual aristocrats that he makes me feel guilty for preferring the draft's absence of French (which makes up more than 2 percent of the language in the traditional version), but I really don't miss the French at all.

Soon after completing his even greater novel, “Anna Karenina,” in 1877, Tolstoy, having climbed two of the highest peaks in literature, turned around and kicked them, renouncing both as immoral works of art, as “soap operas.” Here is the traditional Frisbee summer picture of a book in a bicycle helmet.

This enormous, 4-pound, 1,273-page Vintage Classics edition of War and Peace tipped the helmet. Next week, I’ll carry a different, slightly smaller Oxford edition, hoping it will balance at 2 pounds.

Since I don’t know Russian, and am totally dependent on translations, I’m just relieved I’m reading prose. Here are a few preliminary words about them, in order of the date of translation : Constance Garrett, Louise and Aylmer Maude, Anthony Briggs, and Richard Severe and Larissa Volokhonsky.

I am very fond of Garrett, who translated 70 Russian works in the late 19th century and early 20th, among them Tolstoy, Turgenev, Gogol, and Chekhov. It is said that she wrote very quickly and if she didn’t understand a paragraph, she skipped it and went on.

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It reads very well anyway, and her translation of War and Peace was praised by Virginia Woolf, Joseph Conrad, and D. H. Lawrence. A friend of Garrett’s, D.H. Lawrence, recalled her ‘sitting out in the garden turning out reams of her marvelous translations from the Russian.

Briggs’ is a controversial translation, because he renders the dialect of the soldiers as working-class slang. It’s a lovely book, with good notes and chapter summaries.

In an article in The New Statesman in 2005, Briggs, a former professor of Russian at the University of Birmingham, wrote about his translation, and said that earlier translations by Garrett and Maude are good but too grammatical, especially in dialogue. “The experience of English readers should be as close as possible to that of Russians reading their own language, and this calls for a wider range of speech registers, especially in dialogue, but also in the narrative.

There were occasions when I considered expressions such as “hooliganism”, “between a rock and a hard place” and “we’ve been rumbled”, before rejecting them as too modern.” This husband-and-wife team, Severe an American and Volokhonsky a Russian, live in France, and they began working together on Russian translations when Severe was reading The Brothers Karamazov and Volokhonsky noticed some inadequacies in the translation.

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At night, I stayed awake in the hut where we were staying to find out what happened next by the light of a small lamp, long after everyone else had gone to sleep and trying my best not to disturb anyone.” Read more... “One of the key questions that Tolstoy asks in the appendix is the central question of War and Peace : how can we explain the fact that, on orders, millions of people go out and kill one another, when they know that killing another human being is morally wrong?” Read more... “The reason I chose War and Peace is that it is the greatest novel of all time and I still think it is even after reading it five times…. As a novelist, when you begin to write in this era it is like the elephant in the room, especially if you love it as much as I do. It’s a demotic theory of history, though not necessarily a socialist view.” Read more... “One doesn’t have to invent the bicycle, there is one: it’s War and Peace.

It’s about how Russia won the Napoleonic wars, and moved into the first row of nations who dealt with European history. In the first production of “The Idiots Karamazov,” at the Yale Repertory Theater, Garrett was played by a student at the drama school named Meryl Streep, who portrayed the aged “translated” as a muddled loon.

Cervantes complained that reading a translation was “like looking at the Flanders tapestries from behind: you can see the basic shapes, but they are so filled with threads that you cannot fathom their original luster.” And yet they persevere: here comes Edith Grossman, four centuries later, quixotically encountering the Don and his Sancho on behalf of a new generation of English readers. Without translators, we are left adrift on our various linguistic ice floes, only faintly hearing rumors of masterpieces elsewhere at sea.

She translated seventy volumes of Russian prose for commercial publication, including all of Dostoevsky’s novels; hundreds of Chekhov’s stories and two volumes of his plays; all of Turgenev’s principal works and nearly all of Tolstoy’s; and selected texts by Her zen, Goncharov, and Trotsky. A friend of Garrett’s, D. H. Lawrence, was in awe of her matter-of-fact endurance, recalling her “sitting out in the garden turning out reams of her marvelous translations from the Russian.

Without Garrett, the nineteenth-century “Russians,” as Ezra Pound called them, would not have exerted such a rapid influence on the American literature of the early twentieth. In “A Moveable Feast,” Hemingway recounts scouring Sylvia Beach’s shelves for the Russians and finding in them a depth and accomplishment he had never known.

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In Dostoevsky there were things believable and not to be believed, but some so true they changed you as you read them; frailty and madness, wickedness and saintliness, and the insanity of gambling were there to know as you knew the landscape and the roads in Turgenev, and the movement of troops, the terrain and the officers and the men and the fighting in Tolstoy. Tolstoy made the writing of Stephen Crane on the Civil War seem like the brilliant imagining of a sick boy who had never seen war but had only read the battles and chronicles and seen the Brady photographs that I had read and seen at my grandparents’ house.

Among the most astringent and authoritative critics of Garrett were Russian exiles, especially Vladimir Nabokov and Joseph Trotsky. Nabokov, the son of a liberal noble who was assassinated at a political conference, left Russia in 1919.

She worked with such speed, with such an eye toward the finish line, that when she came across a word or a phrase that she couldn’t make sense of she would skip it and move on. Garrett is often wooden in her renderings, sometimes unequal to certain verbal motifs and particularly long and complicated sentences.

The typescripts of Nabokov’s lectures, which he delivered while teaching undergraduates at Wellesley and Cornell, are full of anti-Garnett vitriol; his margins are a congeries of pencilled exclamations and crabby demurrals on where she had “messed up.” For example, where a passage in the Garrett of “Anna” reads, “Holding his head bent down before him,” Nabokov triumphantly notes, “Mark that Mrs. Garrett has decapitated the man.” When Nabokov was working on a study of Gogol, he complained, “I have lost a week already translating passages I need in ‘The Inspector General’ as I can do nothing with Constance Garrett’s dry shit.” A less imperious but no less discerning critic, Korea Tchaikovsky (who was also a famous writer of children’s books), esteemed Garrett for her work on Turgenev and Chekhov but not for her Dostoevsky.

Soon, she tried her hand at translating minor pieces, beginning with Goncharov’s “A Common Story” and Tolstoy’s “The Kingdom of God Is Within You” and then moving on to her favorite of the Russians, Turgenev. In 1894, she left behind her infant son and her husband and made a three-month trip to Russia, where she drove long distances through snowstorms by sleigh, visited experimental schools, and dined with Tolstoy at his estate.

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When Garrett returned to England, she began an ascetic lifelong routine of housekeeping, child-rearing, and translating. Mornings, she made oatmeal for her son David, and then, according to her biographer Carolyn Heilbronn, “she would go round the garden, while the dew was still on the plants, to kill the slugs; this was a moment of self indulgence.” Garrett was a sickly woman, suffering from migraines, sciatica, and terrible eyesight, and yet her ailments did not deter her from working as a translator.

She turned down an offer from Tolstoy’s close friends Louise and Aylmer Maude to collaborate on a translation of War and Peace and did it on her own. Garrett went nearly blind working on War and Peace.” She hired a secretary, who read the Russian text to her aloud; Garrett would dictate back in English, sometimes grabbing away the original text and holding it a few inches from her ailing eyes.

They went back and forth like this several times, including a final session in which Richard read his English version aloud while Larissa followed along in the Russian. Their hope was to be true to Dostoevsky, right down to his famous penchant for repetition, seeming sloppiness, and melodrama.

Unlike Garrett, who started small and then worked her way up to the big, baggy monsters of Dostoevsky and Tolstoy, Severe and Volokhonsky began with the bulkiest and most complex masterpiece imaginable. “The Brothers Karamazov” is, to use Mikhail Bakunin’s famous term, the most polyphonic of Dostoevsky’s novels, the one with the most voices, tones, and textures braided into the text.

Tolstoy and Chekhov are far clearer, more serene; perhaps, among the main nineteenth-century texts, only Gogol’s “Dead Souls,” with its singular vocabulary and jokes, is as difficult for a translator. He says, ‘Be prepared for anything.’ Then, ‘lowering his eyes, he himself prepared to step across the threshold to the carriage.’ Dickens would never have joked at such a moment.

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“Translators too often look for the so-called Russian sensibility, and, lo and behold, they find it: the darkness, the obsessiveness, the mystic genius. He knew that if he didn’t finish ‘The Gambler’ on time he would lose the rights to all his future books for the next nine years.

In the Sidney Mona's “Crime and Punishment,” the translator uses “pal” instead of something like “old boy.” “We won’t do that,” Severe said, making the face of a child who has inadvertently eaten a Brussels sprout. Even when they desperately needed the money, they refused an offer to translate Victor Profane’s fantastically dirty novel, “Russian Beauty.” Nor did they find much to admire in a recent scandalous text from Russia, Vladimir Stroking’s “Blue Lard.” “It was the only book I ever asked to have removed from my house,” Volokhonsky said.

“It seemed to me that English prose had become textureless, flavorless, flat, naïve, a kind of dull first person. The sun was rising over the hills.’ Now, Dostoevsky often writes in the first person, but there’s a richness of texture and idea and voice.

Garrett breaks things into simple sentences, she Hemingwayizes Dostoevsky, if you see what I mean.” “In the Wichita Eagle, we got an amazing full-page review with the headline ‘ Karamazov still leads creative way, ” Severe said as we broke for lunch one day.

During the Soviet period, citizens were deprived of censored works but could read countless translations: Boris Pasternak’s “Hamlet,” Vasily Zhukov sky’s “Odyssey,” Nikolai UNEDIC’s “Iliad.” Pushkin paid epigrammatic tribute to UNEDIC: As part of the Revolution’s project to educate the masses, Maxim Gorky initiated a publishing house in 1918 with the plan of producing at least fifteen hundred volumes of “the most outstanding works of world fiction”; the project came to a halt in 1927, having turned out a hundred and twenty books.

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His intention, as he makes clear in the introduction, is not to provide a traditional “poetic” rendering, a pleasurable English “Onegin,” like Abraham Yarmolinsky’s, James Fallen’s, or Charles Johnston’s noble attempts. For his part, Nabokov intended to provide the reader with a literal-minded “crib, a pony,” as he once told an interviewer.

“And to the fidelity of transpose I have sacrificed everything: elegance, euphony, clarity, good taste, modern usage, and even grammar.” He had no hope for “Onegin” as an English poem. Let me repeat that unless these are thoroughly understood and remembered, all “general ideas” (so easily acquired, so profitably resold) must necessarily remain but worn passports allowing their bearers shortcuts from one area of ignorance to another.

Despite the stubbornly eccentric and unlovely texture of Nabokov’s “Onegin,” the work was generally well reviewed, especially by those who understood and accepted his intention and did not go looking for an English poem. The most notable exception was Edmund Wilson, who decided in July 1965, to wage battle against the translation in the pages of The New York Review.

Since 1940, just after Nabokov’s arrival in the United States, Wilson and Nabokov enjoyed a warm friendship, a constant Dear Colony–Dear Bunny correspondence full of mutual instruction, jocular competition, one-upmanship, and traded enthusiasms. Wilson had been extraordinarily kind to Nabokov, making introductions for him that led to teaching jobs, a Guggenheim fellowship, contracts with book publishers, and publication in The New Yorker and The New Republic.

Wilson did not hesitate to tell Nabokov that he did not like “Bend Sinister,” “Lolita,” “Ada,” and other major works. (He never bothered to read “The Gift.”) Nabokov, despite his debts to Wilson, treated him, especially on Russian matters, with a breezy condescension: “Dear Bunny, I am going to steal an hour from Gogol and thrash out this matter of Russian versification, because you are as wrong as can be.” Wilson was bemused by many of Nabokov’s literary judgments, his disdain for Mann’s “asinine” “Death in Venice,” Pasternak’s “vilely written” “Dr.

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Since Mr. Nabokov is in the habit of introducing any job of this kind which he undertakes by an announcement that he is unique and incomparable and that everybody else who has attempted it is an oaf and an ignoramus, incompetent as a linguist and scholar, usually with the implication that he is also a low-class person and a ridiculous personality, Nabokov ought not to complain if the reviewer, though trying not to imitate his bad literary manners, does not hesitate to underline his weaknesses. Wilson not only disapproved of Nabokov’s “bald and awkward language”; he also discerned in his friend a desire to “torture both the reader and himself” by “flattening out” Pushkin.

The particulars take up the bulk of Wilson’s attack, though he closes with some lapidary tribute to Nabokov’s mini-essays on Pushkin’s period, cohort, and influences. After reading Wilson’s piece at home in Montreal, Nabokov cabled the co-editor of the Review, Barbara Epstein, in New York: “Please reserve space in next issue for my thunder.” If Wilson saw his essay as simply an elaboration of an ongoing game, his target did not.

Nabokov, whose sense of humor was so supreme on the page, was not at all amused, and his counterattacks, published in Encounter and The New York Review, filleted Wilson personally as well as in the philological particulars: As Mr. Wilson so justly proclaims in the beginning of “The Strange Case of Pushkin and Nabokov,” we are indeed old friends.

A patient confidant of his long and hopeless infatuation with the Russian language, I have always done my best to explain to him his mistakes of pronunciation, grammar, and interpretation. Upon being challenged to read Eugene Onegin aloud, he started to do this with great gusto, garbling every second word and turning Pushkin’s iambic line into a kind of spastic anapest with a lot of jaw-twisting haws and rather endearing little barks that utterly jumbled the rhythm and soon had us both in stitches.

There were a few last desultory letters in the years left to them, but Nabokov could never fully forgive the “Onegin” affair and other slights, including a wounding passage about his wife, Vera, in Wilson’s memoir “Upstate.” A quarter century of intense friendship ended. In a letter to the Times Book Review in November 1971, Nabokov wrote, “I am aware that my former friend is in poor health but in the struggle between the dictates of compassion and those of personal honor the latter wins.” Wilson died in June 1972.

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He said that the hardest part of starting a long project like “Anna Karenina” was “getting the voice,” capturing the narrative tone that will run throughout the book. Despite their growing reputation in the United States, they failed to impress the editors at Penguin in London.

Severe thought that he had solved the problem by taking out some of Tolstoy’s more repetitive or over emphatic passages. “Then we got a persnickety copy editor who kept telling us that things might read obscene in a way we hadn’t intended,” he said.

At Viking-Penguin in New York, Caroline White, a senior editor, ordered a print run of thirty-two thousand, with the hope that some strong reviews would mean that the new edition would displace Garrett, the Maude's, and other translations on the academic market. White informed them that Viking-Penguin would print an additional eight hundred thousand copies of their translation in a single month.

Soon the buses, subways, and coffee shops of America were filled with people reading Tolstoy. Flush, though not rich, Severe and Volokhonsky split their time between the apartment in Paris and a farmhouse in Burgundy.

They have been thinking about future projects, including the stories of Nikolai Lesson, famous for “Lady Macbeth of the Sense District.” But they cannot look too far ahead, because the publisher Every man has engaged them to translate the novel that E. M. Forster insisted was the greatest of all, and that is certainly the longest volume in the nineteenth-century lineup: War and Peace.” Volokhonsky is about two-thirds of the way through with her first draft, and Severe about six hundred pages into his. In the battle scenes, we have to come up with the words for particular kinds of guns and cannons, for military tactics.

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There is a huge hunting scene, so we have to find very particular words for the wolves, the foxes, the kinds of dogs, the horses, the color of the horses, their gaits, the shape of their paws and hooves and the way they wagged their tails. “Even when people go to war, with tragedy and grief, there is still a safe and harmonic world,” Larissa said.

Severe, especially, has read some theory about translation : Walter Benjamin, José Ortega y Asset, Roman Jacobson, and, of course, Nabokov. At the end of our last conversation in Paris, Severe went to his shelves and pulled down a volume in French, and read a prayer by Larboard addressed to St. Jerome, who translated the Bible into Latin.

Severe snapped the book shut and picked up the Maude translation of War and Peace, ” which he’d been reviewing for his own work. About your questions: I don’t know how “new” it is to translate the French passages in War and Peace.” Edmonds keeps only the Eh Bain, Mon prince” of the opening speech, but puts the rest in English, whereas Tolstoy has the first ten lines in French, along with many other extended dialogues in the opening chapters.

The Maude and Garrett versions translate all of it into English, as they do, for instance, Napoleon’s letter to Murat, and the German of Farther’s disposition before Austerlitz. Tolstoy used French for a reason, or for several reasons: to give the tone of the period; to play on the ironies of a French-speaking Russian aristocracy suddenly finding itself thrown into war with France; to suggest a certain frivolity and crookedness in characters like Prince Vasily and the witty Bilirubin.

Interestingly, when Napoleon banters with his troops, he does so in French, but when he talks seriously, Tolstoy lends him Russian.

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